maskedone2's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Fragment 1]

animations great

but the story was a little confusing at first,
its not really explained what they are doing in the first bit or who the characters are. I like how you don't know why the city was blown up or what that thing was (yet)

tbh i think you should start to develop the characters more through flashbacks in later episodes. or create a prelude

the sound could do with improvement, but your probably on a low budjet, the voices are ok though

Kreid responds:

Yeah, episode 2 is all about the character development and introducing a new set too.

[Just Tests]

this was good...

most people submit test to the flash portal, but this was the first good one i have seen :D

and please make blood lust

Zackie responds:

Hmm...helpful =)

[RuneScape: Lvl 76 Fishing]

again marvelous

after just seeing HALO: retreat

i have to say

bravo

another short quirky masterpeice

PoptartOverlord responds:

Thanks for understanding what I was trying to succeed at. Not a masterpiece like everything else here on Newgrounds, but a quick, and simple little sketch. Thanks bro!

[Halo: RETREAT!]

damn good

unique style
quite quirky
i think youll fit in
you should make something long and with a storyline

PoptartOverlord responds:

I'm working on something at the moment, which I think has a pretty good story line. This was more of a sketch really, though. Thanks for all the compliments though, really moves me to do more.

[The Crucible...ReDone!!!]

god no

the only reason i'm reveiwing this is because i am bored
the one rule i have always followed with ng is this:
write a proper script or draw well

however i'm sure the story would have made had i known what the crucible is
but please when you submit something be carefull drawing it and spend alot of time doing it
if you don't use layers already try using lots of them, for the limbs of each chraracter, and for anything that will be moving seperately

also my i add the frame rate thing to another of your flash's.
to highten it you use the properties panel at te bottom when you have nothing highlighted
use it wisely as a too high frame rate will kill it, same as a low one

KaosKilla9231 responds:

Yeah, Not To Repeat Myself, But I Rushed This, So Quality Obviously Suffered From That. The Advice Really Helped Out Btw, So Thanks =)