god no
the only reason i'm reveiwing this is because i am bored
the one rule i have always followed with ng is this:
write a proper script or draw well
however i'm sure the story would have made had i known what the crucible is
but please when you submit something be carefull drawing it and spend alot of time doing it
if you don't use layers already try using lots of them, for the limbs of each chraracter, and for anything that will be moving seperately
also my i add the frame rate thing to another of your flash's.
to highten it you use the properties panel at te bottom when you have nothing highlighted
use it wisely as a too high frame rate will kill it, same as a low one