Stuff like this....
....has to be the best type of story. It's simple, rathe ironic and has a touch of noir style to it. Which again is ironic as most noir films are about criminal justice.
Next time, do something funny
I's good for your first
But its a bit dodgy in some places, as in smoothness. but at least your doing frame-by-frame and not many tweens
Its too cliched and unoriginal
I don't really like flash films that try and copy someone elses idea anyway so forgive me for being biased.
Its GREAT animation at parts, but others it seemed a bit choppy and like you spent more time on other effects.
But what i wasn't so keen on was the way you copied madness and then mixed dragonball Z with it. It just looked like you tried TOO hard.
but the story was a little confusing at first,
its not really explained what they are doing in the first bit or who the characters are. I like how you don't know why the city was blown up or what that thing was (yet)
tbh i think you should start to develop the characters more through flashbacks in later episodes. or create a prelude
the sound could do with improvement, but your probably on a low budjet, the voices are ok though
Yeah, episode 2 is all about the character development and introducing a new set too.
poking fun at shitty flash!
it was great how you pointed everything out and drew it badly, this style makes up alot of newgrounds flash and annoys the life out of everyone.
factual information about toilets in games?
the art style was good and its clever how you made the characters move with the slightly shaky camera
I also loved the voices
i loved it
the animation was great
the voices and sounds effects were
and it was quite funny
i like this
its good animation
the only problems i have is there is no story particularly and just seemed like alot of random events.
and there is no preloader so it just loops again and again after its even finished
good luck on your next flash!
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